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Without me, you can’t be whole.
Without you, you are nothing.
I love you. Right?
I love you too.

Our breaths were tight, and we held them, savoring the taste of each other on our lips. I couldn’t imagine it being more perfect. Or I mean, you. Months ago, I would have stayed home, asked you to just drop me off on the corner, yes there is fine. But something came alive inside. Bravery? No. Courage? No.

It must have been the moment I looked into your eyes. I was afraid. Scared to death of what I might see back. All I could see was me, swimming in your blue forever. And now we lay, our backs pressed against the rusted metal of the shiny silver slide, the playground I had grown up at,  just a mere mile away from my own home. Your arm under my head, my eyes open too wide, waiting for that shooting star. It was like a drinking game and I’m the alcoholic; every shooting star was one more kiss, every airplane one touch closer. You would laugh at me, run your hands through my hair, slowly. I closed my eyes, drunk off a buzz I couldn’t blame on beer.

Is this forever?
No it can’t be.
So are we all just temporary?
No. We are now.

It amazed me how our hands fit so perfectly together, how our bodies intertwined instantly, like the sob after a cry, the light after a switch. We were meant to be.
Is this what you wanted?
I’ve been waiting for this all my life.
No wait. I’ve been getting ready all my life for this.
©2008-2009 ~IsThisWhatYouWanted
:iconisthiswhatyouwanted:

Author's Comments

I want to come closer
But you are so distant
Lately your thoughts are so far
And I want to show you all that you're missing
I'll meet you right where you are

Oh love, I've always known you
Oh love, you've always been mine
Oh love, I'm only asking you for your life

Say that you need me
I know what you're feeling
You cannot do this alone
I gave my word and I gave you my life
So you'll never be on your own

Oh love, I've always known you
Oh love, you've always been mine
Oh love, I'm only asking you for your life

Is this what you wanted?
Is this what you needed?
(You're waiting for this life to be what you've been waiting for...)

Oh love, I've always known you
Oh love, you've always been mine
Oh love, I'm only asking you for your life
Oh love, I've always known you
Oh love, you've always been mine
Oh child, I'm only asking you for your life

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:iconmintamite:
This is...
Beautiful, for lack of a better word.
The style..just everything.
I tried to pick a favourite line, but that's impossible.

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I'm falling with paper snow.
:iconisthiswhatyouwanted:
thank you so much!!!!
im sorry i've been behind on reading all your stuff
but i will catch up

i think i could have done more with it
what do you think?
are there any changes i could make?
and thank you for the favorite

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JUST DANCE
:iconlunacat13:
Oh my gosh.... You made me cry
Sometimes I really do wish it could be like this
That was perfect

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Women are like...Altoids! They're curiously strong
:iconisthiswhatyouwanted:
thanks!! for the fav and comments and all

well to be honest
you inspired me to write this

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JUST DANCE
:iconlunacat13:
^-^ That's very sweet.
It's kind of exactly the way I wish it could've gone.

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Women are like...Altoids! They're curiously strong
:iconmintamite:
I think it's perfect. And you're welcome.

Don't worry about it.. I think I'm going to scrap alot of them... they're just not...just not.

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I'm falling with paper snow.
:iconisthiswhatyouwanted:
awww thank you again haha

ya i see but i should still try and read them

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JUST DANCE
:iconisthiswhatyouwanted:
well there is still time

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JUST DANCE
:iconmintamite:
if you wantttt. =]
and anytime :)

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I'm falling with paper snow.

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